Worm’s Eye Axon and/or Plan Oblique Feedback

Hi, current 3rd year student grinding out drawings for my final review. Was assigned to draw a detailed axon of a specific space of my entire project, so I chose the top floor of my library. Trying to be all different and cool I'm trying to draw it from a worm's eye view but it kind of keeps coming out like dogshit.

Also now trying a plan oblique worm's eye as well, it's kind of coming out clearer but considering I cannot find any existing entourage in this view to add to a final drawing I'm considering just dropping the worm's eye aspect.

But the effect would be so cool!! Any advice is greatly appreciated, first pic is the normal iso axon, next is the in progress oblique. Thanks!